CK Lynn

I liked it but it ended to quickly. Also, some of the lines look like they should be one line, like these two: She was a dancing girl. types with ...

It's good, but it seems to have been rushed, and just slapped down. The reapting lines have it tottering on the edge of being a poem. Have you tried song ...

My first story? Hmmmmm..... when Iwas 4 or 5 I wrote a story about a king & queen. They got trapped in their castle and died of starvation. Weeds over ...

Rule #890000000343: "Always say thank-you after someone gives you a gift. The Reason: "It shows courtesy and tells people you care." The Truth: Thank-you is a password to cloaked spaceships ...

An eclipse? I thought. But these things are in the news... I watched the blackness grow larger and larger. The rest of my family didn't seem to notice the sky ...

Now out of the car, the crisp fall air nipped playfully at my thin jacket. I looked out over what seemed like endless wilderness, and saw that the orange sun ...

put the key in the ignition. The engine made a sound like a coughing elephant, then fell silent. We were out of gas.

Here is some advice. PLEASE READ IT. 1) Never "PM" somebody who you think is interesting. They'll think you're weird or something. Leave a message in their guestbook. 2) NEVER ...

I liked her, but the arm that wasn't holding the staff looked so unnatural. Try to make it belong in the picture.

All of your pictures are vary.... monochromatic. You do have talent, though. What about some "happy" pictures?

Okay, here are the rules 1) You may write for any character in the cast, as long as you don't kill them off without the original author's consent. 2) No ...

Aren't you kind of late? And why is he so grouchy? CK Lynn

Her eyes twinkle like precious stones. She giggles, cooing. Her laughter floats in the air. Her smile, so bright and happy, makes my heart feel warm. She grasps my finger, ...

Your poem was vvaarryyy strange. Are only men lazy? Please fix your ending. This one doesn't fit. This was a strange poem.

Your song was nice, but sooooooo depressing :cry: . How about some happy tunes? Also, your song didn't have alot of body and seemed to "slip" a lot.